Panel one got a LOT more headroom – hopefully it doesn’t wind up feeling too spacious after type goes on. Panel two may look like it’s gotten wider, but the fact is it’s just been scaled less than the others.
Post-type, I find it amusing that the page I managed to bang out the largest amount of space on is also the page where the HUGE PILE OF WORDS finally eases up.
Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.