20141221, 18:47 – The second part of the Space Edit – the {Astral} part. Extensively reworked. Retooled from eight panels to ten, reordered, edited out the psychic crack in Blackwater’s visor. Brought in a panel from the previous page, which has been all but completely gutted and reworked. I still need to redo the script; not sure if that’s going to happen tonight or not.
19:44 – It happened. New script. Not very new, mind you – it’s more a reword than a rewrite.
Second Edition Metadata
20090823 (32) – Scale-and-crop-o-caust – sides of one and two and more substantial chunks of three, five, and seven. Four, six and eight also lost a bit, though the goal here was to preserve all three of those panels for scale. This was originally a straight even eight paneler, but I think it’s pretty clear where the focus – and the need for space – is.
20090910 (22) – Lettered.
