Another shot replacement. If you’re a first time reader and have been paying attention to the earlier versions of pages, you’ve probably noticed that the Daedalus is now consistently moving “right,” instead of “left,” as it did in the first edition(s) of the scene. It’s a minor detail, but one of those things that springs out when you’re editing a LOT of pages at once.
Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.