20141206, 05:20 – Work on details -20- and -21- got out of hand and grew to encompass suction -1-, -2- and -3-. Those edits were visual continuity – this one was a planned-from-the-start text edit to bring the name of Ornix’s vehicle in line with what it actually is. While I was in there I reworked a couple of lines and made a few cleanup tweaks, so the page is now slightly different, though it still does what it needs to do. If you’ve read it before you don’t need to read it again. Woo!
Mastering notes, 2016.12.07 – Minor dialogue adjustments.
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20090821 (21) – Shirts fixed, notes made for future adjustments. To reiterate what I’ve mentioned previously – I’m not biting into this juuuust yet, as I haven’t quite figured out where the new panels are going. Hopefully I’ll have an idea by labor day, as I have no other plans that weekend and would love to Get Something Done.
20090824 – Thought this one would need re-renders and roof raising and whatnot – turns out it didn’t. One scaled and cropped, two and three scaled, four cropped quite a bit, and five scaled and cropped. Lost an arm, kept the face. Hooah!
20090910 (27) – Lettered.