All cropping, some scaling. Some in-page dialogue revision as notes for the impending rewrites. Improvements, I assure you. The one thing I have to remember is to make sure the layout of the next page (atc_d2_601) matches exactly, the same way it did in the first edition.

Hee hee. Barn.

20090907 (48) – Lettered. Chapter effectively complete barring typos and a final once-over, which I’ll do when it comes time to upload it. Which at this point will be in a month or two, at the earliest.

Mastering notes, 2016.12.07 – Overhauled Thad’s attitude without changing it completely.


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