20090821 (16) – Shirt fix pass.
20090823 – Prepared to receive two new panels. Cropped everything – Panel one lost quite a bit of unused space, two lost some shirt (but gained some ceiling), three shaved a bit from the top and bottom, six (was four) lost a bit off the bottom, and seven (was five) was trimmed a bit on the top and bottom. It might get a bit cramped when it comes to dialogue, but otherwise… plenty of space for Val to do her thing, I think.
I tried widening the third panel with a render… no love. I forgot, cameras don’t object to height (or haven’t yet), but width… width is pain. So much for that idea!
20090909 (16) – Lettered.