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Posted 2004.08.14 Posted by dmh Has Mastering Notes

20141215, 11:56 – The third page of the Naomi edit!

12:46 – Touched panels one, two, four, five and six. Thickened West’s neck, broadened Naomi’s jaw, tweaked eyes and eyebrows and ears and so on.

Second Edition Metadata

Patagonia is Smartass for “South America.” Though if continent, country, and city names were the same between annexed realities, it would either get confusing, or irritating. All those “primes” and “twos” and whatnot.

Also, holy shit SO MANY WORDS. An accurate (if lengthy-lengthy) summary of one arc of the next four chapters. Holy crap!

And I thought it was wordy the first time around.

Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.

Cast

Greg Auriga

A Heirotus defector and the only survivor of the Hemera, Greg lives in constant fear of being “recovered” by Heirotus. Having played a critical role in John West’s decision to leave the Templar, Greg...
Naomi Houston

A former Marines Corps Navigator, Naomi handles the Daedalus whenever West has other priorities. Hotheaded and irreverant, Naomi swears like a sailor and is known for making impulsive piloting decisions, with a marked tendency...
Shannon Israel

The Daedalus communications officer, Shannon picks up languages the way most people pick up song lyrics. A native of the Terran-adjacent pocket universe of Alleste (4.0), Shannon works with West as a means of...
Raven Lockheart

A South Jersey punk with a bachelor’s degree in psychology and a Templar-forged Master’s degree for field work, Raven posed as a high school guidance councillor during the early stages of the Waking God...
John West

The first extraterrestrial human to be born on Terra. Home-schooled by Templar, he left the organization in 1997 citing management issues and took the Daedalus with him. John is an incredibly talented Navigator, having...

Glossary Articles

Airbase

The Airbase, located deep in the Australian outback of Earth 2.0, is home to the crew of the Daedalus and the resting place of the Heirotus FTL test platform Epiphany. Defenses include automated turrets,...
Epiphany

A Pecora class star freighter used for early Heirotus BTS tests. Presumed destroyed during a premature BTS discharge event in January 1968, though no wreckage was recovered. Status upgraded to “missing” after captain and...