A fine line measured in hours, unfortunately – after adjusting the layout to the new dimensions, re-lettering (from a pre-existing rewrite) and cleanup… SO MUCH CLEANUP… my day is shot, it’s Beer O’Clock and I still need to shower.

But hey, the page looks better and reads better. Hopefully future edits will take less time to edit than they did to create.

The background is “proper” splash size – hardcopy will have a nice thick border around each page – this thing fit for width but not for height. Them’s the breaks!

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Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.

Cast

  • Ryan Harmon

    The operations officer aboard the Cheops– quite possibly one of the most boring paramilitary jobs anywhere. You sit around, play video games, download porn, and occasionally strip down and check over the sensor hardware...

  • Jason Polaski

    Commander of the Cheops, one of a small handful of veil-capable Templar vessels in Earth’s neck of the woods. Polaski is known to have a deep love of explosives- his interest in ordnance drove...

Glossary Articles

  • Cheops

    A Titan class low orbit and upper atmosphere patrol craft, the Cheops is the sole Templar vehicle permanently assigned to Terra. Orbiting the earth in Am or within the Veil at a depth of...

  • GSV-368.3 (Earth)

    Not listed in the official ICG star charts, GSV-368.3 appears only in highly classified Templar navigational databases. GSV-368.3 is the only human-rated planet in the GSV-GSW 0.15 AEI “sinkhole.” The local Templar garrison refers...