If you remember this page from the first edition (in which it was signal -11-), you’ll notice right off the bat that the last two panels have been dropped and replaced with an exterior shot of the Sabrosa. There’s a damned good reason for that – the original panel three stinks to high heavens. When this scene was originally-originally created (oppose originally edited), the ship CG didn’t exist yet, so the idea of doing exterior shots wasn’t something that occurred to me on a regular basis. While the fit feels slightly clunky, the redone page is so much better than the original that I’m not going to get all hung up on it.

Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.


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Glossary Articles

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