dcr5_script_page_15Re-Murder and a comparison of interstellar mega-corps to Japanese economic models, processed in parallel with 5.16. Also, first in-progress shot of Beef regenerating. I imagine it smells awful. Like cabbage, or feet. Or Mitt Romney’s tax returns.

2012 07 16, 05:19 – Revised the dialogue, left the panel count alone. Nothing to cut, really – and axing Greg’s initial reaction shot from 5.14 adds some weight to his reaction here.

2012 07 16, 22:39 – Back to pondering panel cuts. While the current 1-3 are a handy thing to have, I’m struggling with whether or not they add to or take away from 5.16. The “for” is that up until this page, Beef has collapsed out of West’s field of view.

2012 07 17, 03:00 – Rendering panel four, which has been revised a bit – going with an areal shot instead of a side shot due to the distance between West and Whitehouse. Should make it a bit easier in the art department.

2012 07 18, 06:17 – Rendering completed around 0900 yesterday, I think. I’m not sure when the last render rolled off the assembly line, but it was dumped into the LZW droplet at 14:44, after I returned from a meeting. Dummies were printed out a little bit ago and the page is now ready for line art – though I currently have four others in front of it.

2012 07 30, 14:46 – Pencilled and inked yesterday, with enough errors and Needs Cleanup to keep me busy for a few days. I expect to make some progress today but don’t expect to have anything ready to shade for at least a day or two. On the upside, I also pencilled and inked 5.16, so I’m heading into August in pretty good shape, schedule-wise.

2012 07 31, 13:58 – Cleanup and coloring complete. Ready for assembly.

16:03 – Line art assembly and preliminary effects pass complete (TMP-45 muzzle flash, Beef’s neck). Dialogue tailed, page ready for shading.

2012 08 03, 14:12 – Started shading around 13:00. Panels 1-3 are good to go. Will resume work after an afternoon meeting, which should end with a run to Utrecht to acquire the supplies needed to execute 5.17 through 5.20 in a reasonable fashion.

22:13 – Primary shading complete. Back from meeting around 17:30 with bristol, did some work comms, had quite a bit of trouble getting focused. The fact that Jason’s a bit of a stinker in panel six didn’t help! Fortunately he’s pretty much Reference Material in panel five.

The page now gets to sit here while I work on the next one. The low quality of the last round of sleep I got seems to be sitting poorly – my brain’s all “uh…” and stuff. Especially in the words department.

2012 08 04, 12:22 – Spit-shined.

Cast

  • A Heirotus defector and the only survivor of the Hemera, Greg lives in constant fear of being “recovered” by Heirotus. Having played a critical role in John West’s decision to leave the Templar, Greg...

  • Senior NCO of the Hemera Addicaine Group. While Greg Auriga is senior Heirotus employee and technically in charge of all Heirotus personnel aboard ship, chain of command puts all Addicaines except Greg and Jo...

  • A black ops field agent who – for reasons unknown – masquerades as a deputy from the fictional Antrim Police Department. Beef is slightly death-prone, and has been killed by Greg and Ornix. Beef...

  • The first extraterrestrial human to be born on Terra. Home-schooled by Templar, he left the organization in 1997 citing management issues and took the Daedalus with him. John is an incredibly talented Navigator, having...

  • The king of social engineering, the crown prince of noise, and a self-described “Post-American Electro-Snob.” Jason has a deep interest in industrial, electronic, ambient, metal and gothic music, and a well-researched interest in radio...

Glossary Articles

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    Descended from detailed scans of an American sedan and custom built aboard Kolg Saerai Orbital, the Beefmobile has more in common with an MRAP than the stock police cruiser it’s camouflaged as. The beefmobile...

  • MCAR-78 “Thumper”

    Called the “Thumper” due to the sound of the airburst rounds and its frequent use as a bludgeon by downed pilots, the Barghosa Multi-function Compact Assault Rifle model 78 is a rugged Bullpup styled...

  • Templar Machine Pistol

    The TMP-45 is standard Templar armament in the late 1990s. Beef Knuckelback, Michael King and John West are shown carrying the gun, and both Beef and West are shown using it. West uses it...

2 thoughts on “Target -15-

  1. thrandrall, :

    “Harware” or “hardware”?

  2. dmhdmh, :

    Hardware, of course. Fixed – thanks for the catch!