Less cleanup than I’d like, really- that damned hand in panel one is a nightmare. The only thing that’ll save it is a total redraw, which is more time than it’s worth at this point. Not out of the question but ultimately one of those “finishing touches” I’ll deal with if I ever have a free afternoon and can’t think of anything better to do.
Like the rest of this eponymous sub-section, the Signal 10-12 scenelet (which was Signal 11-13) has been completely rewritten. Night and day, really – Grij is more to the point, though not as “artsy” in his presentation as he was in the previous version of the page. This is more straightforward and a hell of a lot easier to maintain going forward.
Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.