Less cleanup than I’d like, really- that damned hand in panel one is a nightmare. The only thing that’ll save it is a total redraw, which is more time than it’s worth at this point. Not out of the question but ultimately one of those “finishing touches” I’ll deal with if I ever have a free afternoon and can’t think of anything better to do.

Like the rest of this eponymous sub-section, the Signal 10-12 scenelet (which was Signal 11-13) has been completely rewritten. Night and day, really – Grij is more to the point, though not as “artsy” in his presentation as he was in the previous version of the page. This is more straightforward and a hell of a lot easier to maintain going forward.


Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.

Cast

  • While General Grij commands the Sabrosa‘s Addicaines, Captain Andreissen is in charge of the rest of the boat. Or rather, she was. She’s been in an exceptionally sour mood since Heirotus CEO Brandon James...

  • The ranking officer aboard HX-47 Sabrosa, Grij is the supervisor and final authority for all paramilitary field operations and training in which the vessel is assigned. The former Director of Applied Psionics Research for...

  • Theo Wakeman transferred to Heirotus after an eighteen year stint as a drill instructor in Armed Services Division Three, ending his NCO career with a corporate cross-promotion. As XO of the Sabrosa Addicaine Group,...

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