Monday. ALL of one. So much time that a redraw might well have been faster. The results… well, they speak for themselves. Admittedly, I spent a hell of a lot more time on the previous page than I did on this one… but it seriously needed it, whereas this one… well, it’s cluttered enough to get away with minor cleanup. Where “minor” is “last I looked at the clock it was ten HOW IS IT TWO?” etc.

Whatever I ate for dinner – some kind of chocolate beef thing my roommate whipped up – is getting to me. The smell has stuck to my hands, the inside of my nose, and there’s something quite particular about it that makes my stomach roll. Might account for the timesink.

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Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.

Cast

  • While General Grij commands the Sabrosa‘s Addicaines, Captain Andreissen is in charge of the rest of the boat. Or rather, she was. She’s been in an exceptionally sour mood since Heirotus CEO Brandon James...

  • The ranking officer aboard HX-47 Sabrosa, Grij is the supervisor and final authority for all paramilitary field operations and training in which the vessel is assigned. The former Director of Applied Psionics Research for...

  • While it’s Megan’s job to know where the Sabrosa is, it’s Tanya’s job to know what the ship is sitting in. She’s responsible for all communications and sensors inside and outside of the ship....

  • Megan is a third shift Naval Operations Officer assigned to the Sabrosa Trainee Command Center. She coordinates the pilot and navigation systems and, among other duties, is responsible for knowing the position, direction and...

  • Theo Wakeman transferred to Heirotus after an eighteen year stint as a drill instructor in Armed Services Division Three, ending his NCO career with a corporate cross-promotion. As XO of the Sabrosa Addicaine Group,...

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