Panel four of the original version of the previous page has replaced the original panel four of this page. Wakeman’s head-turn was acceptable – Grij’s hand on his shoulder was wince-worthy and Wakeman saluting is simply one of the shittiest pieces of “art” I’ve created, ever. To mitigate The Horror, useable panels got moved around and the page was given a more effective layout. It’s also been given a pretty serious money shot of the Sabrosa to fill space.

Spaaaaaace.


Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.

Cast

  • Captain Soleina Andreissen

    While General Grij commands the Sabrosa‘s Addicaines, Captain Andreissen is in charge of the rest of the boat. Or rather, she was. She’s been in an exceptionally sour mood since Heirotus CEO Brandon James...

  • General Grij

    The ranking officer aboard HX-47 Sabrosa, Grij is the supervisor and final authority for all paramilitary field operations and training in which the vessel is assigned. The former Director of Applied Psionics Research for...

  • Major Wakeman

    Theo Wakeman transferred to Heirotus after an eighteen year stint as a drill instructor in Armed Services Division Three, ending his NCO career with a corporate cross-promotion. As XO of the Sabrosa Addicaine Group,...

Glossary Articles

  • Sabrosa

    Heirotus capital ship prototype 47 (HX-47) Sabrosa is the testbed for several technologies incorporated in the Type 47 class of Heirotus Colonial Authority warships, in mass production at the time of The Dualist. The...

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