Panel four of the original version of the previous page has replaced the original panel four of this page. Wakeman’s head-turn was acceptable – Grij’s hand on his shoulder was wince-worthy and Wakeman saluting is simply one of the shittiest pieces of “art” I’ve created, ever. To mitigate The Horror, useable panels got moved around and the page was given a more effective layout. It’s also been given a pretty serious money shot of the Sabrosa to fill space.
Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.