20141221, 18:49 – The second part of the Space Edit – the {Astral} part. I threw out most of the old page and built a new one from parts. New 3d renders from old files; an extensively photoshopped Grij; the elimination of several panels and reforging of visual continuity and the addition of a HAND OF DOOM. I’d go into more detail but it’s time to re-script and I need to eat first – my brain has run out of gas. Bigtime.

It’s a good thing this bit of the plot is practically self-contained – major changes here don’t really ripple out beyond “goes to character.”

The big script difference: THERE ARE NOW WORDS. Words that firmly place Grij in the middle dropship and acknowledge the new HAND OF DOOM.

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20090823 (33) – Cropped the hell out of two and three as well as a bit of five. Not one of my better pages, and consequently one I just kind of breezed through, rather than spending a good amount of time on. Gotta avoid the temptation to redraw panel five!

Also, I think it’s about dinner time.

20090910 (21) – Webscaled.

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