20090810 (7) – Another scalencrop, with more lamps snipped. Panel two does look quite a bit gloomier without them, I think… and though it would have been MURDER, a shot of the lot FULL of cars and activity and whatnot in like chapter one or two would have really helped drive the point home.
Unfortunately I “forgot” Ornix’s shirt in the previous edits, so that’s it for forward progress for today. Back around to fix those; new stuff tomorrow or Wednesday.
Whichever it is depends on when my fedex order shows up, as that’s going to be Night Of The Living Computers!
20090908 (10) – Lettered.
Mastering notes, 2016.12.07 – Minor dialogue adjustments. Balthazar now has a bit more of a role than he did previously.