Pulled apart and put back together again – a few things haven’t been changed, but Xand’s background and the background of the bottom panel have been scaled extensively. The Chibi raven and the remaining panels haven’t been touched in terms of scale. End result is that while it’s the same basic layout, the panel composition has changed quite a bit.

Cleanup has been very minimal. Of the first six pages of this scene, the other five were completed first and my patience has a limit. I think enough rework was done for me to skimp on the cleanup – at least this once. A lot of tweaking went into the next page, and that’s the one that’ll be sitting on top for a few days. Or weeks.

Cast

  • Raven Lockheart

    A South Jersey punk with a bachelor’s degree in psychology and a Templar-forged Master’s degree for field work, Raven posed as a high school guidance councillor during the early stages of the Waking God...

  • Xand

    A pink-haired mechanical genius with a full complement of prosthetic limbs (one “bolt-on,” three high-quality synthetics) and no memory of her first twenty years, Xand is the Daedalus flight engineer. A non-terrestrial human with...

Glossary Articles

  • Airbase

    The Airbase, located deep in the Australian outback of Earth 2.0, is home to the crew of the Daedalus and the resting place of the Heirotus FTL test platform Epiphany. Defenses include automated turrets,...

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