More headspace for Raven in panel four, along with some basic cleanup and scrubbing. And continuity – pip! I’m pretty sure that’s the last one I forgot. I hope. Also background tweaks and overall replacement, a la the previous page. The huge increase in headspace really works here – for once I had an overblown amount of dialogue that I was actually able to fit on the page.
Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Added some hills to the background of panel two.