Lots of work here, all around – repaneled, with plenty more headspace in panels three, four, and five… and a new top-of-the-head for Xand in panel two. She ate up WAY too much space otherwise. Also, redid the keypad on Raven’s handheld – it’s been parted out into its own .psd file and is now consistent for number and position of keys, if nothing else. A few shading and anatomical glitches have been fixed (not all of them, that would take all day), and while the end results are far from perfect… I think they’re acceptable.

Of course I would – it’s my goal to get the scene done today.


Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.

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  • A pink-haired mechanical genius with a full complement of prosthetic limbs (one “bolt-on,” three high-quality synthetics) and no memory of her first twenty years, Xand is the Daedalus flight engineer. A non-terrestrial human with...

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