More headspace for the top two panels; not much change for everything else. This wound up creating the right amount of space for West and a bit too much for Raven. Tantek’s fingers on the bottom panels never made much sense, so they’re gone now. Less cleanup time on this page than the last two – while it arguably needs more love, I’m trying to get my scrub time down to something resembling reasonable. Which means minimal turd polishing when I can get away with it.
Mastering notes, 2016.12.06 – Minor dialogue adjustments.