Lots of the usual cropping and scaling, followed by a MASSIVE injection of new words – point of fact, the word count has expanded so much that I actually had to CUT a couple of Greymalkin’s lines from the script. It makes no difference either way, fortunately.

Greymalkin’s full line of occluded dialogue :

It's fascinating stuff, really. The Bhaal had an interplanetary empire back when Egypt was Egypt - their moon, their Mars, their Venus... they discovered the annex, tried to tap it for power or something and-

This is noteworthy from the standpoint that most annexed realities seem to have burned out, died out, or otherwise ceased to be occupied by ~humanity at some point.

Evened out the inks in panel one, added a couple of missing details for panel two, and changed Raven’s expression from 😛 to 😐 in panel four.

Cast

  • Tantek Cestric

    A former United States Army Ranger, Tantek has been with Thule Garrison since the Waking God Protocols field trials of the mid 1990s. He works well with Raven Lockheart, typically functioning as muscle though...

  • Raven Lockheart

    A South Jersey punk with a bachelor’s degree in psychology and a Templar-forged Master’s degree for field work, Raven posed as a high school guidance councillor during the early stages of the Waking God...

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