Lots of the usual cropping and scaling, followed by a MASSIVE injection of new words – point of fact, the word count has expanded so much that I actually had to CUT a couple of Greymalkin’s lines from the script. It makes no difference either way, fortunately.
Greymalkin’s full line of occluded dialogue :
It's fascinating stuff, really. The Bhaal had an interplanetary empire back when Egypt was Egypt - their moon, their Mars, their Venus... they discovered the annex, tried to tap it for power or something and-
This is noteworthy from the standpoint that most annexed realities seem to have burned out, died out, or otherwise ceased to be occupied by ~humanity at some point.
Evened out the inks in panel one, added a couple of missing details for panel two, and changed Raven’s expression from 😛 to 😐 in panel four.