the dualist : Convergence (part 2) up.
posted 2009.01.30 at 21:00
7-12 : Go.
Seriously committed to both the rewrite and the reformat now. This is one of the bits I'm still uncertain about... and I'm not sure how well it will work in the long run. Or rather, until there is a long run for context.
Monkeys.
Less total cleanup, more emphasis on creating headspace. Some reworking - the Eye Of Sauron became a Meaningful Stare became gone, covered by table. Other minor adjustments, but only the one major-major change.
Six more, probably same time next week. Then a redraw, which'll probably take longer.
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Uh... yes? Generally I'd prefer to typorno on a scene-by-scene basis, though... I haven't been all DOOD OMG CHECK PLZ on teh irks because this scene is like 2/3 done, instead of 3/3 done. When it's DONE then there'll be a point to you doing a readthrough.
Of course, you're not just a typornographer, you're also (effectively [affectively?]) the Editor. Hence my preference for giving you entire scenes to proof (now) instead of bibs and bobs.
Ooh, we can comment here now too. So, like, am I typornographering those bits? Or what?
xeno | January 30, 2009 11:18 PM